The Mask of Vanity

One thing to consider is that her kneecaps start too low down her legs. Between where the knees are and where her hips should be under that dress, it seems like there's over a full torso-height of leg, and that shouldn't be. The kneecaps should be up to at least the point between the bottom of the dress and where the kneecaps are now. This picture is anatomically correct, and great job on that, but the issue with the kneecaps makes her seem way too tall when in actuality she's measured just right. I've been sitting here for a good ten minutes trying to figure out why she looks abnormally tall when she's not, and that's why. Be careful with that next time.

Now, great lineart, coloring, and shading all around, and this conveys a great message. Nicely done.